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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 22, 2004 0:34:20 GMT -5
Aw crud. I over-looked that. Shoot. hang on, I'm gonna fix it... (I wrote that bit at 11:30 PM. That's my excuse. Sigh.)
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 22, 2004 1:20:58 GMT -5
Aw, okay. Here's another bit. I'm a bit tired, so if I overlook a thing again (like Hedwig) please feel free to tell me... gosh. I probably won't write much either.
When he finally reached the stairs, Harry creaked the door open. Ron's back was turned to him, but without looking, he could already tell tears were streaming down his cheeks. "You know what, Harry?" Ron's croaking voice sounded throughout the room. "You know what Percy did the first second he got me alone? He asked me how our friendship was. He asked me if he spoiled our friendship."
Harry gulped. He didn't like how this was going. "W-What did you say?"
"I told him not to worry, because I didn't listen to him anyway." This was not as bad as he expected, but he still had that edge of a feeling. "So he said that was good and I left. However, I had this feeling, you know? So I stayed to listen behind his door."
Danger signs flared in Harry head. He didn't want to here this.
" 'That takes the cake! I am going to strangle that skinny, gangly freak! I swear, if mum wasn't around. You'r forgetting yourself! You must make people think you are sorry. Pull yourself together. We all want Harry Potter dead.' "
I'm too tired to write anymore.
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 22, 2004 13:18:17 GMT -5
that was really good, puppy, but it confused me...was that percy saying the last line??
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 22, 2004 15:35:22 GMT -5
Yeah, it was dramatized, you know? It was like Ron hearing it from outside the door, you know, eyes widening?
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 22, 2004 16:01:58 GMT -5
i'm so confused though...who was percy talking to?? or are we not supposed to know yet? OOH, i think i got it! this is GOOD!
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Post by amiphist on Jun 25, 2004 15:00:12 GMT -5
puppy, please write more soon, when i get back on monday i want this to be updated
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Post by POLYMAGUS on Jun 26, 2004 22:58:32 GMT -5
i hope there is at least 2 more chapters by the time I get back on the 15th of july
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Jellybaybee
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Post by Jellybaybee on Jun 26, 2004 23:08:23 GMT -5
ooh, i get it, write more!
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 26, 2004 23:19:00 GMT -5
Oh, you guys are so sweet! I'm leaving for a week tomorrow, so I'll try and write a lot this time.
Silence. Harry didn't want to believe it. His head was spinning. "Y-Your not serious, a-are you?" Ron's face told him he was dead serious. "You don't think, that, perhaps-"
"WHAT DO YOU THINK I'VE BEEN WORRIED ABOUT HARRY?" He shouted, standing up, looming over him. It was like they had traded places. "MY BROTHER IS A DEATH EATER!" His breathing was labored.
"RON!" Harry bellowed, yanking him down. "Not so loud!" He brought Ron's face close to his and he whispered. "If he is a death eater, we can't let him know we're on to him."
The redness slowly evaporating from his cheeks, Ron looked calmer. "You're right, I-"
The door slammed open. Percy's dark eyes surveyed him, towering onto their helpless bodies. "What did you call me, Ron? Did you call me a DEATH EATER?" Reaching down, he grabbed Ron by the shirt collar. "How DARE you even insinuate it! I will pound you into a bloody pulp if you ever."
SLAM. Percy's limp bpdy smashed against the wall, crumpling into a heap. "Don't you ever threaten him." Harry seethed, his fist clenched. "Ron," He turned to his friend who had tears streaming down his cheeks. "Are you okay."
Sobbing, Ron began to cry on Harry shoulder. It was the most surreal thing that ever happened to Harry. Ron, his best friend, the humor relief, was crying on his shoulder. Patting him on the back, Harry's heart felt ripped in two. "It's okay."
The only noise that was heard was Percy's inconcious breathing. Until,
"You knocked out my brother, Harry."
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 26, 2004 23:28:29 GMT -5
Chapter 11 Only a Train Away
Finally, the day Harry had been dreaming about, came. With all of his stuff packed away, Harry stepped in the doorway of the house, ushering people outside. Percy had been extremely cold to Harry; he recieved a pleasant gift. A purple bruise ensnared his eye. When asked about it, he only muttered, "I ran into a wall." It was incredibly funny; Harry choked on his breakfast and had to be revived by Mrs. Weasley.
By the time they all were inside the Ministy-provided cars, Harry couldn't stop smiling. Ron, if possible, looked even happier than Harry. Leaning close to him so Hermione and Ginny couldn't hear, he whispered, "Finally out of that hell hole."
Harry couldn't help but agree. The days at Grimmauld Place passed as years. But it wasn't nearly as long as the drive to the station. By the look on Harry's face, you would've thought he had been traveling across the Sahara Desert. His eyes grew grey circles around them and when they finally arrived, he practically fell out of the vehicle. "Honestly, Harry, you are such a drama-king." Hermione snorted.
Smiling innocently, Harry gathered his things. When he felt the rush in his hair as he sprinted into the platform, he never felt so free. Turning to Ron, he grinned. "I haven't felt that free since Diagon Alley." The word erupted from his mouth before he could stop them.
"What?!" Ron cried increduously. "You came-"
"Oh look, your mum wants to say good-bye!" He hastily interjected, pointing. Hopefully, Ron's abysmal memory would continue.
I CANNOT WRITE ANY LONGER!! LOL! i will write more later.
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seeker1214
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Post by seeker1214 on Jun 27, 2004 0:48:32 GMT -5
wow...i only just read these and theyre amazing!....incredible!...JK should employ you or somthing!
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 27, 2004 11:16:38 GMT -5
stupid harry...stupid...*slap* oh...poor ron....i feel SO bad for him....puppy, this is awesome! give ron a hug for me, will you?
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 27, 2004 11:21:11 GMT -5
*gives Ron a hug* Of course! I claimed himin the Gen HP page and he is officially "My Weasley".
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 27, 2004 12:13:19 GMT -5
not like i need to tell anyone who my weasley is...
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 27, 2004 12:40:58 GMT -5
Ah, but heck! Do it anyway!
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