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Post by ¡Snowy! on Jun 2, 2004 5:08:58 GMT -5
hehe, confusion. *waiting* i am loving this fic!
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 2, 2004 12:05:39 GMT -5
PUPPY!! gah!! you're just TRYING to make me cry, aren't you?? omg, i am crying....to harry, love sirius...omg, puppy...this is SO good...
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Post by danielkvc on Jun 3, 2004 2:31:39 GMT -5
More more more, I need more....
OMG I normally don't like fanfic at all but this could have been written by JK herself, this is just too good, so incredible....
My compliments, ...
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 3, 2004 2:34:15 GMT -5
Oh gosh, thank you! I can't write now because I have to go to school and yesterday was PACKED! I ended up FINALLY getting home at 9:00! CUL8R
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Post by danielkvc on Jun 3, 2004 2:37:42 GMT -5
No, please take your time, this is so good I will gladly wait ...
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Post by amiphist on Jun 3, 2004 5:38:21 GMT -5
puppy, i have names you the best ever fic writer, as a compliment to orli, i said she was nearly as good as you
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 3, 2004 10:34:51 GMT -5
where is the next installment??? *looks around franticly.* GAHH!!
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 3, 2004 11:38:48 GMT -5
WOOHOO! Thank you for all the incredible compliments! YAHOO! I have time to write!
Chapter 6 Secrets and Punishment
Harry lived off of Sirius's letter for many days. His love for his godfather thrilled through his veins as he repetitavely tried to wither clean the house or do his homework. Frantically searching for his book on Potions, Harry decided it was best not to leave Snape's essay to the last second. Ron trudged up the stairs and flung his body next to Harry, sighing incredibly. "You know," he groaned, back to his usual state. "I'm afriad my mum's lost it. Not to be rude, mate," He stole a quick, sideways glance at Harry. "But they way she watches you, you'd like you were a five-year-old."
Shaking his head, Harry mumbled, "I'm alive. I'm not dead and I am in the safest place I can think of. Why aren't people satisfied with that?"
"Blimey, Harry," Ron replied, astounded. "We thought you died. We literally thought you no longer were breathing. And this time, it wasn't one of your crazy stunts. It was something preventable, something these people have been trying to stop. You should've seen Lupin when he got here."
Harry looked up feverishly from his book and stared at Ron. He had been wanting to know what happened during his short disappearance, but too feeble to ask. His attention was hooked; Snape's essay was no longer of importance.
Nodding his head, Ron added darkly in a low whisper, "I'll never forget that night." Harry could tell tears were fighting their way back into Ron's eyes. "He came in, soaked. He was shaking, crying, and, you should've seen him, mate, he was a complete wreck. It took us a while to calm his down, we could understand a word he was saying. He kept muttering off phrases, like, 'failure' and 'broken promise'.
"When we finally realized what had happened, the room went into complete destruction. I swear, Harry, it was as if the world herself died." Looking up at Harry, tears in his eyes, he said, "You see, Harry, everyone cares about you. Everyone worries. I've never seen 'Ermione in a worse state. Remember when she got all in a huff and decked Malfoy?" Harry smiled reminiscently. "It was massively worse than that. Hermione swore. Yes," He laughed, peering over at Harry's incredulous face. "She did. I never knew she had such a dirty vocabulary. The point is," Ron hastily ended, obviously uncomfortable with the whole "emotional help". "We care so much. When I saw you out there, I thought I'd lost my best friend. You have been with me since day one. When I was going to school, I never would've dreamed I was with the "famous Harry Potter". I did't think I would have any friends. But you were there. Just as insecure as me. Throughout our entire friendship, you were there. Just as insecure as me. I thought I lost that."
Harry saw that Ron couldn't control his tears any longer. Getting up, the two of them embraced, probably the least manly thing Harry ever remember doing, save the time Dudley had force him into a dress for his 4th grade picture. "What are you guys doing?" squealed a voice, laughter sneaking in it. Ginny was in the doorway.
Ron's mouth hung open, but Harry just chuckled. "We were getting in touch with our feminine side, something you should consider doing." And he walked out, Ginny's angry cries clawing his back.
This isn't the end of this chapter, but I have homework and b-ball practice.
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Post by PetitePirate on Jun 3, 2004 11:52:14 GMT -5
ohhh...poor ron...poor lupin....poor harry...omg, i just wanna hug them all!
as always, puppy, AMAZING. i can't wait to read what happens.
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Post by ¡Snowy! on Jun 3, 2004 13:15:30 GMT -5
omg, i love it. this is really good.
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Post by amiphist on Jun 4, 2004 9:48:05 GMT -5
that is brilliant
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Post by PuppyDawg on Jun 4, 2004 11:12:59 GMT -5
"What time does his school meet?"
"I don't know! I think around September 4th, but I don't know if you are thinking it through. It's really risky, with all those wizards about!"
"Hush, I don't want the word getting out! Put yourself together, woman! We must go, it's the only way to get to Harry and Dumbledore."
"Please, we're fine. It's much too risky. We don't even know where we went!"
"Of course we know! Maybe not the exact position, but we know, at least, who he is with! Pack your bags, it's decided. We're giving Harry a little visit."
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Harry awaited the day until he returned to Hogwarts. Of course, he loved being at Grimmauld place much more than the Dursley's, but it wasn't the same without Sirius. And, the Molly-coodling was getting extremely repetative and old. When the owls came, Harry's excitement jumped in his throat. "Can we go to London to get this?" He asked, trying hard to conceal his excitement. He really wanted out.
Mrs. Weasley gave a sharp look at Lupin, who sighed. "Harry," He started, disappointment rushing through Harry's veins. "I think you know the answer to your question. There is no we."
That's the end. Kinda weird ending, but I thought it was harsh reality, you know?
Chapter 7, next!
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Post by amiphist on Jun 4, 2004 20:08:27 GMT -5
wow, you are so good
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Post by BlueFrog on Jun 5, 2004 5:07:04 GMT -5
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Post by amiphist on Jun 5, 2004 5:38:39 GMT -5
*joins in the chant* more more more
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